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The DragonScar Rules+Character Creation

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  1. zeria-kawaii Goldfish queen

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    so working on the dragon scar and doing some different things then the original , this thread is to ask questions and rules


    ok so the rules

    no godmoding
    nothing above pg 13
    relationships are allowed but like the rule above keep it clean
    no being op unless it is plot related and the host is ok with it (example : able to doge everything have a power that will kill everyone instantly .)
    YOU MUST WAIT TO HAVE YOUR OC ACCEPTED BEFORE ROLE-PLAYING , because some oc's might not be suitable or something might not fit with the lore or there magic is to op
    no one liners please
    up to two magics and for demons a curse (fairies get a blessing)
    races allowed
    humans , demons , dragons,
    fairies, Forrest guardians (i will be picky with this race )
    hybrids (part dragon and human , demon and ice spirit , be creative


    character creation form + guide

    Name:
    Age:
    Gender:
    Appearance:
    Magic :
    race:
    personality:
    curse or blessing: (demons and fairies only)
    backstory





    A mini guide explaining stuff
    a guide on using the form

    Name: Alex
    Age: 20
    Gender: female
    Apearence:
    Magic : plants + healing
    she is able to use plants bending them and make them grow , they can be used to fight .
    she is able to heal on a small scale like bruises and bones but if the limb is taken off she will not be able to heal it
    race: Forrest guardian
    personality:
    + observant - absent minded - rude + strong willed/stubborn + not easy to anger
    Alex is a observant girl who would rather have more peace then war . She ends up being very absent minded when alone and will daydream . She often is thought of as rude for being blunt with what she says not caring what people think . She is often thought of as a strong willed person not giving up until she has won or convinced someone to stop . She has also been seen as a overly happy person . She has a soft smile on her face and is not easy to anger .
    curse or blessing: (demons and fairies only)
    backstory: Alex grew up a orphan not knowing who her parents were but, she was found and was adopted by a small village couple in the Forrest . During her child hood she realized she was able to do magic and used it to help with chores and other kids . The small town had barely and visitors and was seen as a town that didn't exist. She was left alone by the other kids in her own fantasy world because she was weird and had magic . She didn't care much though and just enjoyed the outdoors instead of the other kids company . By the Time she was about ten she had began to realize she was more different then she thought and was upset by it . As time continued she grew into a capable girl who didn't have many friend , she began to hear rumors about dragons attacks and demon attacks at age 15 she interested in what a dragon was asked and was told of the prophesy she realizing she had a scar and was a part of it decided to help raise a army of the other people with 'dragon scars ' she waited a bit though for she thought she was to young but on her 20th birthday she began to stick notes around other towns leaving her own for once


    Example of rp style needed :

    Alex walked through the Forrest it was shaded and cool she was loveing it and her connection to the trees . She felt happy in the Forrest like all around her was dancing . "I wish that it could just stay like this forever . This is perfect " she said with a big grin on her face for this was amazing she felt so at peace . Nothing like any of the other Forests she has been in before . She then glanced her head over to riku who was awaiting for her so they could continue there quest and fix alex's arm


    Bad example :
    Alex walked around .

    Notice how one has more details and gives you more of a image of what's going on while the other is a simple one liner with no emotions nor details .

    So a request don't use one liners



    Example of a good oc personality
    + observant - absent minded - rude + strong willed/stubborn + not easy to anger
    Alex is a observant girl who would rather have more peace then war . She ends up being very absent minded when alone and will daydream . She often is thought of as rude for being blunt with what she says not caring what people think . She is often thought of as a strong willed person not giving up until she has won or convinced someone to stop . She has also been seen as a overly happy person . She has a soft smile on her face and is not easy to anger .


    Bad personality examples
    Perfect in every way no flaws
    Alex is perfect in every way she always does what's needed and will stand up no matter what . She never gets Ngry and loves animals . She is also super smart and can tell what your thinking every minute of every day

    Only flawed
    Alex loves to destroy things all they do is kill and are psycho murderers they want to rule the world and they want to kill everyone . They are the worst person ever

    Over powered
    Alex is able to over come every problem within her way she is always able to get through it without a sweat and is able to take a million hits without getting hurt


    These are bad examples don't use them or I will not accept the character
    Good character backstory
    Alex grew up a orphan not knowing who her parents were but, she was found and was adopted by a small village couple in the Forrest . During her child hood she realized she was able to do magic and used it to help with chores and other kids . The small town had barely and visitors and was seen as a town that didn't exist. She was left alone by the other kids in her own fantasy world because she was weird and had magic . She didn't care much though and just enjoyed the outdoors instead of the other kids company . By the Time she was about ten she had began to realize she was more different then she thought and was upset by it . As time continued she grew into a capable girl who didn't have many friend , she began to hear rumors about dragons attacks and demon attacks at age 15 she interested in what a dragon was asked and was told of the prophesy she realizing she had a scar and was a part of it decided to help raise a army of the other people with 'dragon scars ' she waited a bit though for she thought she was to young but on her 20th birthday she began to stick notes around other towns leaving her own for once
    Bad character backstory
    Alex grew up a orphin , because her village was raided by bandets she was always alone they didn't kill her because she was gorgeous as a child and could have been of use to them later (this is lazy and Mary sue ish and has nothing to do with the plot )
     
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  2. Punk Panda 1 Konobi

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    Shall I Begin?
    Name: Panda One Konobi
    Age:12
    Gender: Male
    Appearance:
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    Magic: Enhancement: allows the user to strengthen their body to certain amounts, but strains their minds and body while doing so. Can increase skin toughness, voice volume, hearing capabilities, etc. This magic is heavily strained when the user uses it all over his body at once, so if user only strengthens one part at a time, the less the strain it'll be for him
    Race: Human
    Personality: -never serious, +taction, +smart(math wise), -nonobservant,-Obtuse, -Cocky, +outgoing, +determined
    Panda is a very set minded person. If he says he will kill you he will. When set onto something he is not serious about anything else but that one thing. Because he is a talented fighter he is cocky and nonobservant. Panda is very smart, mathematically and tactically making him very smart in battle but not in actual life. Horrible in relationships, not like he is been in one.
    Backstory: Born in a spartan like family Panda was taught how to fight when young, at the age of 5 he discovered his Enhancement magic and decided to use it for Sparta against the Dragons and Demons. But because he had magic something Spartans hated they forced him to hide his magic. He did so for two years before he left his family and Sparta, he left because he hated being held down, he may have been carefree but that was the only thing he was serious about. So after he left he fell sick and unluckily ran into a Dragon, seeing such a sight as this scared Panda, he used all his magic and ran, ran back home to find, find it destroyed by a Dragon, the same type of dragon: Fire Dragon, only flames, rubble, and bones and blood were left of Sparta. He left crying and ran into a nice women name Ajira. She nursed him, took care of him and showed him happyness, and for the first time in a long time, he felt happiness. She made sure to teach him normal studies, though only math, also she taught him better ways to fight with his magic and to always have a set goal in mind. He left her arms at 12 when he found out he was one of the Dragonscars in the world. So Panda One Konobi ventured into the world looking for Dragons to kill, and other Dragonscar people
     
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  3. zeria-kawaii Goldfish queen

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    Everything looks great but I'm wondering if the age 12 is a good idea because in this rp you have a chance of dying like immediately because of demons or dragons . Perhaps a rogue fairy . But besides that everything is great
     
  4. Punk Panda 1 Konobi

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    My bio I think covers my character's chance of survival against Dragons and Demons. You think that he would be better off being a fairy?
    I like this whole roleplay thing but you should make a thread for people to post their Bio's that way it all won't be crammed in one thread. :)
     
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    Trying to decide if I wanna bring in one of the old characters, or start totally fresh...
     
  6. zeria-kawaii Goldfish queen

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    lol I was gonna start fresh but I really wanna bring Alex back along with Eli because I Just need to . Also bringing in a new oc to ! Maybe I will bring riku back
    yes but I think that it's not a good idea for them because they are pretty strong . And there might be limbs torn off for a kid it might be hard to see . Plus you have to think of how they will last ~~like if a limb or two gets torn off~~ how will they react . Also no I was just mentioning that there are also rogue fairies not that I think he would be better off as one
     
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    I'll definitely have a fairy, I didn't expand on Zaheer that much, there was a whole story arc of his that never got completed, but ohwelll... Probably going to start fresh on the fairy OC.
     
  8. zeria-kawaii Goldfish queen

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    nice I'm excited to see . I might end up taking Alex out and Eli because we couldn't finish the story and the entire arc wouldn't make sense anymore . Though riku lol she wouldn't change . I'm probably gonna bring a new Forrest guardian in . Off to make a new oc
     
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    also this is just the rules and character thread I have a separate thing for rp
     
  10. Punk Panda 1 Konobi

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    well, he went threw insane training as spartan... saw his village destroyed... I think he already took alot of trauma then some people twice his age. if he lost a limb he would do what anybody would do: scream in agony! Oh, and did you think Ajiri was a rouge fairy???
     
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    Talia Mauvra (open)

    Name: Talia Mauvra
    Age: Ageless, appears seventeen
    Gender: Female
    Appearance (open)
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    Curse: Rosa Dernum. Talia is able to use her demonic arm to create a poisonous miasma, which centers around her arm like a claw. This poison is able to melt through organic and inorganic matters easily, burning flesh and corroding metals. As an unnatural Curse user, Talia has no natural control over it, and has to keep the arm in check with blood runes, which she conceals under bandages. She is immune to the poison, though she often destroys whatever she wears or is holding when it is activated.
    Blessing: Shadowfall. Talia has no wings of her own, instead she is able to absorb the natural and artificial light around her, focusing them into a pair of massive, ornamental wings of light, which do not exude any. With these she is able to fly like a regular fairy, and can fold the wings around her arms into the shape of a lance to pierce things with concentrated energy, able to extend roughly four feet from her at any time, though doing so disables her ability to fly. Despite being a light-based ability, it's use causes the surrounding areas to fall into darkness, hence the name.
    Race: Fairy.
    Personality: -Abrasive +Honest -Confrontational -/+Trusting +Loyal -Vengeful +Self Assured
    Talia finds it easy to hate others, though those she trusts she holds very dear. Vengeance is a common goal of hers, even simply taking an object from her can result in a permanent hatred. She is always willing to give someone a chance if they've only just met, though it's more than likely she'll find some reason to dislike them. She finds no interest in her heritage, not considering herself a proper fairy in the first place, preferring to think of herself as simply a being. When it comes to race and species, she sees no difference between any, as willing to help a demon as she is a human. Despite all the anger she surrounds herself in, her faith in herself never wavers, even after a loss she'll get back up and continue with her life.
    Backstory (open)
    Talia was born deformed, with a lack of wings and a missing arm. Being one of many children of the Mauvra tribe, fairies especially skilled in light based manipulation, her lack of magic as well as wings saw her an outcast, though she never understood why. Her tribe was made to send almost the entirety of their adult population to war against a powerful demon tribe called the Heirmunans, in which they were wiped out, her and the other children were spread by their caretakers all along the continent. Finding herself captured by a human merchant, she was placed in a bottle, sold as a novelty to some human in a stone home. Brooding in her bottle, Talia never gave up hope that one day she would be free, though her tiny form was unable to shatter the glass she was entrapped in. One day, a servant knocked over her bottle off the shelf, shattering. Shielding herself from the rain of glass with her one arm, Talia rose up, unsure of what to do next. The woman who had accidentally freed her attempted to step on her, only for a burst of light to cut her big toe off. Rising off the ground, Talia turned from her miniature form into her full sized body, from as a Fey, and sprouted great wings of light, bathing her rescuer in darkness. Seeing the woman terrified, she slapped the servant across the face, sending her tumbling. Wrapping herself in her wings, Talia sobbed for a mere moment, before casting aside her sorrows, exploding out in a massive, burning fury. Free at last, she left the rubble behind, from a distance it almost looked like the castles her mother always spoke of in tales as a child, but destitute and crumbling down. Not sure what to do now, she limped around the forest, looking for others, only to run into a demon. Seemingly dying, the snow white being saw her missing arm, and, in an act of kindness Talia still does not understand to this day, use some form of magic to transmute his arm from his body to hers, granting her a full body. Losing control of her new arm, she seemingly corroded and melted away her new companion, before she ever learned his name. Wandering the countryside, she tried again and again to find a place she belonged, though was met with tragedy at each place she stayed for long. Unable to assume the miniature form of a fairy due to the demonic blood that had tainted her, she learned to deal with life, often acting as if she was human.

     
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    Aye there's my fairy-thingy.
     
  13. zeria-kawaii Goldfish queen

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    yasss yasssss it looks amazing
     
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    Haha thanks Zeria.
     
  15. zeria-kawaii Goldfish queen

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    Aye of course . I'm excited for this series to be coming back . Lol the rate it is tonight we may be able to start this evening
     

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